Social Animal


Animal

Poem Form: Concrete Poetry and Device:  Enjambment. More Details can be found HERE.

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64 thoughts on “Social Animal

    • Thank you.. many and so much! Trust me, the shape started from elephant, went to panda and then to human. Took a lot of time to edit but had fun.

      I would suggest, get the words and then start shaping it out. Take a break and be back again. Something will turn out! 🙂

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  1. I haven’t explored many other poems yet, but I have to say that you really conquered this challenge! You nailed the shape and the poem, intertwining animal and human traits and behavior. WOW!

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  2. I love how the hands are composed of the words “bring all change” and the feet describe dreaming – both movement toward doing amazing things and placed in the hands and feet of the individual. Brilliant!

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  3. excellent! This was the most difficult assignment so far on Poetry 201 so I am just getting around to exploring other responses. Your whole thing flows – the shape, the words, the ideas in them. Thanks. it must have taken effort.

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    • Thank you so much. It means a lot to me.. 🙂
      Yes, it did take a lot of time and transformed various forms before it reached this. Had to give up some words to fit inside the form. 🙂
      But, sure it was fun.

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  4. G’day PH,
    How very clever of you, you nailed it and the poem itself is terrific as well, I didn’t do the concrete section, I know when to quit while ahead 🙂 looking forward to seeing more of your work in the future.

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  5. Most remarkable and deserving of the nice comments left up to and before today. A pleasure! Some of the ideas which are suggested by your poem are interesting. Unusual way to write and a success!

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