This story is written for Sunday Photo Fiction: 29 November 2015. The task is to write a short story of 200 words or less for the supplied photograph.
There were 5 tires. They were best friends. They were talking a walk on the beach. They always used to stick together. One of them was a little different. It always used to discuss with others the following questions:
What will happen to me when I wear out? Why should I be working so hard when I know how and where I will end up? Why should we clean ourselves every day? Why should we work every day? Why all this when we know our future which is so clear? Why do you all keep smiling all time? Why does God give us all so much pain? Why can’t God keep me happy?
Just then, the sea god, listening to all this, came nearby and said, “I am sure I can’t keep you happy! But I can keep the other 4 happy by taking you away” and washed him away!
Well, This is not the end!
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Very creative
I wish if I could write this
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Thank you so much! 🙂
You sure can. Thoughts flow with time. and they get better every time.. 🙂
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Reading it somehow reminds me of “The remarkable rocket” by Oscar Wilde. The message hidden in this tale is powerful and it goes well with the picture.
Nicely written piece of writing (:
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I am glad you could relate!
Thank you so much.. 🙂
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Rocket in this short fantasy tale of Wilde’s is a selfish protagonist who thinks everyone is inferior to it.
I’ve recently finished reading it. Your story is not directly related to this fantasy tale but I found that you have weaved an important message in your story and I just can’t help mentioning it (:
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oh. There is a lot i need to know from you.. 🙂
I am glad to have met here!
Thank you so much. This means a lot.. 🙂
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Such a clever idea for the story! Love it! 🙂
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Thanks a many.. 🙂
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Maybe he should have been grateful for what he already had. A clever idea for a story!
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Exactly! Thank you so much.. 🙂 i am glad..
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Sometimes I wonder if my thoughts are like this 😛
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Haa! Such a lovely comment! 🙂
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Very clever story.
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Thank you so much.. 🙂
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Ha, ha, you have a good imagination!
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🙂
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Great story from a tricky picture!
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Thank you so much.. 🙂
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Haha that’ll work 😀 Loved this
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Thank you so much.. 🙂
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You’re welcome 🙂
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There’s a moral to this story! 😀 The sea shut him up! LOL!
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Happy to read that comment. 🙂
Thank you so much.. 🙂
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Very very clever!
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Thanks a many.. 🙂
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