You have added all flavors to this short story. There’s tragedy and there’s irony here. Even for six words story, It’s said that it should have a beginning, middle and end and while reading this tale, I can imagine a start, climax then a sad end. Good job (:
But you still had ten more words! Lol
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ha ha.. 😀
five more actually. 😛 (The first five words are part of story too.)
Thank you.. 🙂
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Lol
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Once upon a time I thought I would write a short story. I began, with hope and imagination. Then I reached the end, too quickly.
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Ha ha.. that was clever.. Thank you … 🙂
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Nice one.
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Thank you… 🙂
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Great take! ‘Read, write and count’ surely told a story in a few words.
👍👍
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Thanks a many Hargun.. 🙂
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Welcome 🙂
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The irony! I wish I had learnt how to write.
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That is what it is! 🙂 Thank you…
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You have added all flavors to this short story. There’s tragedy and there’s irony here. Even for six words story, It’s said that it should have a beginning, middle and end and while reading this tale, I can imagine a start, climax then a sad end. Good job (:
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Exactly. That’s how a story forms.
I am glad you found it good. Thank you so many much. 🙂
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Great one, Prakash…it’s 20 words actually….and quite meaningful… 🙂
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Thank you so much.. 🙂 Yeah. less than 25 was the plan. 🙂
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Cute story. I’ve never heard of a 25 word story.
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Thank you.. 🙂
There have been of all kinds lately on web.. 🙂
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You’re welcome 🙂 I must be living under a virtual rock then! 🙂
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Ha ha.. or may be just a few clicks away.. 🙂 Web itself is a like a virtual rock. We all see a variant of it.. 🙂
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yes it is in many places with many faces, ever changing.. 🙂
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Nice
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Thank you… 🙂
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Congratulations on being #1 on Indie Blogger Prakash!
Loved the short story! You are a genius…
Sherri-Ellen 🙂
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Thank you so much… 🙂 yayy! 🙂
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A lot said in those few words…. 🙂
Nice one…. 🙂
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Thank you Umair.. 🙂
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I like the idea of this. Short and sweet:)
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Thanks a lot.. 🙂
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A dream weaved in less than 25 words! nice!!
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Exactly that! Thank you so much.. 🙂
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short and sweet, good story! I’m an English teacher myself. Keep writing.
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Very Happy to hear that.. 🙂
Thank you so much.. 🙂
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