This short story is written for the Indispire Edition Number 117. Here is the supplied prompt:
Just when everything started looking fine, the phone rings.. [Build a story]
#TringTring
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It was her engagement and a gathering of associated family and close friends. There was a delicious black current cake as a witness of celebration. She had got some awesome presents and day was going just fine. Just when everything started looking fine, the phone rings. It was awkward because she had stopped using that SIM from a long time as it had some unwanted associated memories. Moreover the call was from an unknown number.
She was hesitant enough to pick the call. ‘Why did I not destroy this long ago?’ was the torturing question in her mind. It was her old dedicated SIM to whom she had assumed was love of her life. She did not wanted it to be him, the long past love, for whom she had spent months to overcome the sadness. He had longed for a break up in spite of all her begging’s and he never told a reason for the case. The ring from unknown number had freaked her out as she had finally moved on and engaged to another seeking true love.
Her hand had an engagement ‘ring’ which was joyous and cell phone which was giving out a ‘ring’ which made her miserable. This guy, with whom she was engaged, who already knew her past clearly noticed her anxiety, came running to her and exclaimed,
‘Oh! It’s me who has called you to your old number from my new number! I want to change your every sadness to happy ones and I want to start with this. Until we get married we shall interact using this contact and make better memories. Let’s replace old ones with new fresh and blissful ones.’
She silently had a few tears.
very nice story, loved it bro.
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Thank you so much Jyotirmoy.. 🙂
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A nice ending 🙂 en-joyful read dear brother! 🙂 – Cezane
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Thanks a lot.. 🙂
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Nice:-)
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Thank you.. 🙂
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Beautiful! That was one lucky girl..’all is well that ends well’ well symbolized through the story 🙂
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A many thanks.. 🙂 smiles.. 🙂
That was the message i had in mind.
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You are welcome 🙂
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That’s a sweet thought!
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Thank you.. 🙂
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Wonderful story…..
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Thank you.. 🙂
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A sweet story! Left a smile 🙂
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Thank you so much.. 🙂 I am happy..
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A noble gesture on this part, she is lucky to have moved on!
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True.. Thank you for the thoughts.. 🙂
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Glad for happy end 🙂
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Many Thanks. 🙂
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Loved it!
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Thank you Upen.. 🙂
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Awesome.. loved it
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Thank you so much.. 🙂
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