This poem is written for Poetry 101 Rehab: Smoke
They catch in a glimpse,
Soak me and rinse,
Blissful mild start,
After effects to heart,
Beats of rhythm raga,
Freezes my saga,
I misplace myself,
Speculating and probing,
“Why me?”
That one sure thing,
Binds me in a ring,
I am scared to stare and ask,
About,
Your killing,
Smokey Eyes!
Its PH 
This is beautiful – a stare that soaks, rinses, binds & scares.
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Yayy! 🙂 Thank you so much.. 🙂
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great and beautiful… loved these lines…
” That one sure thing,
Binds me in a ring ”
great work… 🙂
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Thanks a many Ashish. 🙂 I am glad.. 🙂
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Welcome:)
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Smoky eyes wins the prize(Y). I would have anounced it this way if it was a contest.
#Talent.
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You made my day Upen! 🙂
Thank you.. 🙂
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Beautiful Poem..:)
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Thank you.. 🙂
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Mr. Poet…you have actually painted a beautiful portrait of smokey eyes….kudos 🙂
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Thanks a many! 🙂
Such a lovely comment.. 🙂
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It’s beautiful 🙂 Lovely and very well done. Loved the start and then just kept loving 🙂
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I am so glad reading your comment. I am smiling.. Thanks you so much… 🙂
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That’s very discriptive (is that even a word?)
And I like how you played around wording the feelings.
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Thank you so much.. 🙂 I am glad…
(I am aware of the version ‘descriptive’)
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Oh yeah … ( my English teacher would love to kill me for that! )
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I love the tone of your poem, it somehow flows perfectly.
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Thank you so much.. 🙂
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Fabulous poem Prakash…
Eyes are the window of the soul….
Sherri-Ellen 🙂
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True.. Thank you so much.. 🙂
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A great contribution to the rehab!
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Thanks a many.. 🙂
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Nice and beautiful…. 🙂
Your flow is just perfect… 😉
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Thank you Umair.. 🙂
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