Wow… this was amazing. And so, so true. We often take today for granted, believing there’s always a tomorrow… but isn’t that just a beautiful lie? Possibly the most heartbreaking lie of them all…
Excellent poem Prakash! I’ve learned to take nothing for granted when my health declined. But I had to learn the hard way. And I believed there was always a ‘tomorrow’….there is but not as we might expect it to be.
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us.
Sherri-Ellen 🙂
The question is ‘how many more will you live?’. Our versions of the past make sense to us, but they could be so far away from the actual, dead-and-gone moments…
Phenomenal piece
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Thank you so much.. 🙂
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Can’t afford, can’t afford….
Shiva
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He he.. See! 😀
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Wow… this was amazing. And so, so true. We often take today for granted, believing there’s always a tomorrow… but isn’t that just a beautiful lie? Possibly the most heartbreaking lie of them all…
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I am so glad to hear from you. Means a lot. Thank you so much.. 🙂
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Excellent poem Prakash! I’ve learned to take nothing for granted when my health declined. But I had to learn the hard way. And I believed there was always a ‘tomorrow’….there is but not as we might expect it to be.
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us.
Sherri-Ellen 🙂
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Thank you muchly.. 🙂
I agree.!
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So very good! Powerful poem.
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Thank you muchly.. 🙂
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The question is ‘how many more will you live?’. Our versions of the past make sense to us, but they could be so far away from the actual, dead-and-gone moments…
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I like those thoughts.. 🙂
Thank you much for adding them.. 🙂
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Excellent composition!!
Not seeing u in my posts 😏
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Thank you so much.. 🙂
Was on a break. Slowly catching up.. will be there soon.. yayy! 🙂
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Thank you for so many comments at a time!
Me too…very rare on blog..time constraints 🙂
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Caught up with all the missed ones. Was treat to eyes to watch splendid pics!
I can understand.. 🙂
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It was motivating :)) thanks
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Thank you so much.. 🙂
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Beautiful! Tomorrow is not promised. But we can only hope to see it.
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Thank you much for adding your thoughts.. 🙂
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Very nice one.
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beautiful lines
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Good one! Replace ‘said’ with ‘told’ in second line for accuracy.
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Thank you sir. Will do it right away. Thank you for the edit suggestion.. 🙂
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I keep hoping I will stop believing in the power of tomorrow! Lovely piece.
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Thank you so much… 🙂
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