When the dreams die,
Burst inside,
Flame within,
Chaos the interior,
With unheard howling cries.
When the dreams die,
The deceased diverges,
Intellect shatters,
World looks hideous,
The water cries.
When the dreams die,
Is like a half carved statue,
Undefined shape,
Just stand ugly,
And the meaning cries.
When the dreams die,
Tears decide to stay in,
Finding inner more beautiful,
Silently dries,
While the heart cries.
When the dreams die,
Rest is all Babel.
One word “Wow”……
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Thanks a many Abhay.. 🙂
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Nice one.
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Thank you so much.. 🙂
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when dreams die it breaks us into pieces 😦
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does. It does. And thus we are born new. Thank you so much for the thoughts. 🙂
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This one is beautiful indeed!!
On lighter note
When you dream of marathon of flaming kisses, more than often they tend to die
Lol
But when dreams die
Look up at the sky
Take out wool and knitting needles
And build a new one
Or submit to the supreme
Maybe his planning is more
Mesmerising than your plans
Very relatable post.Dreams die for many but don’t let the pain crush you. Feel it and let it go. Keep your insides clean to make space for better stuff.
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He he.. I wanted to write two varying emotion poems at same time. That is how these two came up. 😀
I totally enjoyed the humor there. You nailed it. Building the new one, immediately, is very much important. 🙂 We all need those needles!
You indeed have left a very positive message. Thank you so much! 🙂
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Thanks Prakash!!
Glad you liked it!!
Thanks for your kind words 😊
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Dreaming is actually a problem
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He he.. That thought does come up to mind too! It does!
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I think it’s a mistake of our society to not share as much emotion as possible. I like to think that humanity would be a lot more…. well human
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I agree. And as a human, emotions are bound inherent.
Thank you so much for the thoughts..:-)
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This is a practical experience. I like it.
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Thank you so much.. 🙂 We all can relate in one or the other, in varying depths!
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Abhay said it all: “WOW!!”
What an amazing poem Prakash!
Sherri-Ellen & Siddhartha Henry 🙂 🙂
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Smiles, and all smiles… thanks a lot.. 🙂
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Dreams crashed do crash our spirits… lovely poem…
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They do, for a moment of time. Thank you so much.. 🙂
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The pain is reflected so well here!
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That was the aim to pen down this poem. I am glad it did. Thank you so much.. 🙂
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WOW…there’s no other word for this… It reminds me of a favorite quote, though , so I’ll have to find and post it.
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Oh wow! I am so glad to hear that! I shall look out for that quote and post! 🙂 Thank you so much.. 🙂
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You’re most welcome 🙂
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It will post in an hour or so!
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Thank you so much.. 🙂 I will head for more soon.. 🙂
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U r most welcome sir
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When dreams die,
We rest and think.
Exercise n stink.
Eat and sleep.
Waking up to a new dream!
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That is such a lovely extension.. 🙂
Awesome!
Thank you so much for leaving that positive message.. 🙂
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U are welcome! Relieved to hear you liked it😅
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Beautiful lines. Well done! I have nominated you for the Lovely Solidarity Blogger Award. Please, check here: https://yoursuccessinspirer.com/2017/01/17/3rd-edition-lovely-solidarity-blogger-award/
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Thank you so much.. 🙂
I will check out soon.. 🙂
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Excellent !
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Thank you so much.. 🙂
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With so much hope, we build a castle of dreams and When it shatters, we break into pieces. Beautifully written
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🙂 True.. Thank you so much.. 🙂
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Excellent! We must never let dreams die.
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🙂 Thank you so much.. 🙂
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Nothing can be more frustrating than letting a dream die. Beautifully expressed.
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A lot very! Thank you so much for the thoughts.. 🙂
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Wow, but let not the dreams die for hope dies with it!
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True. The only way is to invest hope in something better. Thank you so much for the thoughts.. 🙂
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Beautifully expressed emotion…..dreams are like phoenix i think….from the asses of one dream another dream emerges…
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They are and they do! Thanks a lot for the thoughts.. 🙂
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Such beautiful words! Excellent post 😃
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Thanks a many.. 🙂
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Will check out! 🙂
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