This story is written for 53 Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers Challenge. The challenge is to write a short story of around 100 words for the given image.
Her father had posted her a letter; a letter to the loving daughter who was studying in the far away land. She kept postponing the reading to tomorrow every day stating she was too busy. Today she had dropped it in water while taking out form her bag and no words were visible. It was all gone.
——————– End of the Story ——————–
Who knows! May be some things are untold. Or it is that they are told but unheard? Was it meant to be so? One thing is true though that “We are never too busy!”.
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I agree too! We are never too Busy, it’s only a matter of preferences.
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That how it seems to be! 🙂 Thank you.. 🙂
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O a cliff hanger! Moral – always read your mail! Or do not put off reading mail that you can read today – ha!
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That is a perfect correlation for today! Thank you so much! 🙂
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A very good message through simple lay of words.
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Thanks a many.. 🙂
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So sad that she didn’t take the time to read the letter – now it is lost to her and she will never know what it said. Great story, PH! Also, it has a good lesson with it.
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I am happy you liked it.. Thank you so much.. 🙂
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Preferences…. and a time comes when there is nothing left but regret…
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Exactly! Thank you for the thoughts.. 🙂
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It’s all about priorities!
Great short story 🙂
The end actually makes a reader ponder ..rather than being an end in itself.
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That is exactly how i wanted it to be.. Thank you for the catch.. 🙂
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My pleasure 🙂
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Pause and think…that’s what this story tells you to do. Poignant.
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Thank you for the thoughts.. 🙂 Very much.. 🙂 Thank you.. 🙂
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True…
We are never too busy…
It’s all about how important different things are to us…
A great way of putting it through this story.. 🙂
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Agree! That is how it is! Thank you.. 🙂
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A lovely tale. Putting off till tomorrow is a never ending story for me!! Great read.
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Thanks a many.. 🙂
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We are never too busy, rather are inefficient or have not got our priorities right…a wise message!
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Apt summary.. Thank you so much.. 🙂
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Another fine example of procrastination but who is to say that it was meant to be this way!
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ha ha.. i very much agree! 🙂
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Namaste Prakash & many thanks for such a poignant & touching short story.
for me the moral of it is: “Do not put off tomorrow what you can do today!”
The story brought tears to my eyes…..thinking about my beloved Father & many of the ‘unheard’ things said between us over the years…..
Sherri-Ellen
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Thanks a lot. I am glad it touched you. You gave a meaningful summary to it. 🙂
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