This story is written for Sunday Photo Fiction: 06 December 2015. The task is to write a short story of 200 words or less for the supplied photograph.
Billy and Nilly had grew up together since childhood. Most of the people who saw them used to ask “Are they twins? They look so much alike!” But they weren’t. Both of them were adopted by the landlord on the same day from two different places. He had taken care of them as their own children with all the greater goods and care.
Nilly used to follow Billy everywhere. May be it was the scent that kept them together always. They had this sort of unsaid connection. It was pleasant to see them doing things together. They kind of had this trust, which one would notice very evidently.
No one could ever even guess that Nilly was blind and Billy was deaf.
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Sweet story with a nice little twist at the end.
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Thanks a lot.. 🙂
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Such a cute story, just love it. And both of them are very cute
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yayy.. Thanks a many.. 🙂
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That just appears in notification comment. Guess some WordPress error. Its coming past few days.
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That is better than awesome 🙂
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This means a lot to me.. Thank you so much.. 🙂
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🙂 You’re welcome Prakash
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It’s a very sweet story… Loved the twist… 🙂
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Thank you so much.. 🙂
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There is a nice connection between your lines here. The flow is soft and uninterrupted and the last line of your story is so very beautiful (:
May be it’s just me or please correct me if I’m wrong but in the following line
“Most of them used to ask “Are they twins? ” the word “them” is confusing me
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Thank you so much for the lovely comment. 🙂 and many thanks for pointing out the ambiguous “them”. I just updated it. It was my mistake that i oversaw that. 🙂 yayy! 🙂
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And it looks perfect now (:
I felt happy reading this story (:
I don’t know why but this very link appears in the start of your every comment
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Thank you so much again. 🙂
There is that problem from past few days. I am not able to figure out how that is appearing up! Will try to resolve that soon. Thank you.. 🙂
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And you nailed it again with the last line.! 🙂
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I actually added it at the very end moment. Glad that it worked. Thank you. 🙂
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[…] wonderful flash fiction story in response to a Sunday Photo Fiction challenge from Prakash who also enters poetry challenges and […]
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A fabulous story to go with the photo Prakash!!! Good to see you here & good to be here myself!
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Thank you so much.. 🙂 yayy… 🙂
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