This story is written for Mondays Finish the Story: August 31, 2015. The task is to write the story in 100 to 150 for the provided image and starting line.
The cemetery spread along the area known as Devils Abode. The name was legacy. Every city in the state had a devils adobe. There was a belief that when the devils adobe of all the cities merge together, the world would end.
There was no sign of merging noticed past thousand years. The inhabitants of the city had a perception that maybe that’s why it was prefixed with devil, which they would never merge.
However what they failed to realize was the growth of city by deforestation, environmental pollution, ageing factors and changing life style was the actual devil out there!
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We’re creating our own hell.
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True! Exactly was my thought.. 🙂
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Good one, PH!! 😊
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yayy! Thank you.. 🙂
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My pleasure dear!! 🙂
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Is it India that is in question 😛
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May be, May not be.. Still a question.. 😛
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Wonderful message in the story..our greed for land and thoughtlessness about the environment is the main devil.
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Thank you.. Like you said, so i meant.. thank you for the thoughts.. 🙂
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Yes we create our own hell or heaven right here on Earth 🙂
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Like you said! 🙂
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Well highlighted issues as Devil. Environment destruction is immense. The latest being Obama at Alaska for ‘Climate SOS’.
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True! have read about that!
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I know right?! We are so focused on myth that we’re oblivious to the destruction we are causing with our hands.
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Exactly! All that i meant. 🙂 We see and we are still on it!
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Man is his own worst enemy. He’s destroying his natural habitat. It’s an important issue and it is excellent that you have highlighted it here.
I like the use of word”adobe” here. Good take on prompt 🙂
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We know it and we still do it! We, humans! Thank you so much for your thoughts.. 🙂
“Devils Adobe” was mentioned in the prompt. I just used it. felt the same as well. Thank you.. 🙂
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‘Devils abode’ is mention in the prompt and I like reading the following sentence 🙂
‘Devils adobe’ of all cities merge together.
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Thank you again.. 🙂
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The idea of the Devil’s abodes of all the cities merging together and signalling the end of the world, seemed particularly interesting to me. 🙂
Nice.
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Thank you.. am happy that you liked the idea.. 🙂
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Good story Prakash! The fact that the people fail to realize what they are doing? Good point! Thanks for writing again for the MFtS challenge and be well… ^..^
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Thank you so much. I enjoyed writing this.. 🙂
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🙂
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