He,
Had a question,
Posted an update,
“How will i know, she loves me too?”
It remained unanswered for few full moons.
He kept thinking,
Amidst the day and dawn,
Alone and frown,
The days passed,
he forgot it too.
One fine day,
There was a comment,
It was,
“Only if you say, that you love her too!”
She.
Ahhh, this is beautful. It put a smile on my face…he said, she said- I love it!
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Thank you Ameena.. 🙂
I started with He and She and filled up with middle. I am glad you liked it.. 🙂
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This is PH and magic of his work. Short yet sweet. 🙂
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Thanks a many ANooP.. 🙂 yayy!
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That’s a good and cute one 🙂
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🙂
Thanks a lot.. 🙂
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So lovely and romantic
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Thank youu.. 🙂
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Very sweet.
Pure and innocent. 🙂
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🙂
Thank you so much.. 🙂
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waw… this is so lovely… 🙂
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Thank you Ashish.. 🙂
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nice! if only he listened to what she said–and vicea versa!
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True! Thanks a many.. 🙂
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Lovely Poem!
Lovelorn Poetry
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Thank you.. 🙂
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I have nominated you for quote challenge… check here… https://ashishvision.wordpress.com/2015/08/22/day-2-quote-challenge/ 🙂
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Thank you so much Ashish. I have many previous pending ones as well in my bag. Will check all soon.. 🙂
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I have nominated you for the liebster award!!! Check it out here :
https://pratyu15.wordpress.com/2015/08/22/yippee-i-am-nominated-for-liebster-award-twice/
Expecting the post with interesting answers from you 😉
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yayy! Thank you so much.. i will check and do this soon.. 🙂
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waiting to see it soon ..:)
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That was a nice one!
Puts a smile on reader’s face 🙂
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Thanks a many Hargun.. 🙂 that comment put a smile on my face as well.. 🙂
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My pleasure 🙂
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Thats so amazingly written 🙂
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Thank you so much.. 🙂
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Nicely done👍
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Thank you so much.. 🙂 many 🙂
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The games people play. So sweet! Love it. ❤
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They play and they don’t say.. 🙂
Thanks a many.. 🙂
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