Eyes have begin to think,
Wrinkles on the face,
Lips aren’t moving the way,
Things aren’t the same,
Heart isn’t in the hall of fame!
A heart does not need a brutal reason to go disheartened. Even just a reason can do it well. A small incident can bring out the tears and later repenting for being so idiotic. In a way, it’s much okay. It is always better to welcome smaller pains now and then following that heart finds a new direction to think for refreshment. Though the consequences and side effects all lead to the disturbances, still it brings a hope of new thinking. If the pain is bigger, then it’s more prone to bigger accidents.
The strangest thing is that we fine tune our feelings in such a way that a little hurt from near ones is more suffocating than a hard hit from one we are not closely associated with. We have our neighbors among-st us who have turned out the pain into sparkling achievements and also those who have lost the track only by thinking on minor issues majorly. It’s time to make the most subtle statement that everything depends on our way of taking and thinking. That’s why many times we feel how foolish we were yesterday!
Once I got an opportunity to visit a heart. The pathway was pathetic. There were no doors or windows, but only long high straight walls. Crying posters hanged up on the walls. Hoarding which announce larger punishments even for smaller mistakes. Notices to digest all the pains and suffer in silence. There were thorn bushes so as not to overcome the problems and fears with black marks and holes. I somehow could not take all this facts.
I broke down the walls and made larger windows and doors. Cleaned up the patches on the pathway and made them smooth. Rolled up the crying pictures with thorns and threw them away. Captured smiling faces and put them up on the wall. I changed the hoardings with good quotes and positive thoughts instead of crying ones. I finally came out smiling. Then I saw the smile on the face. Who am I? Who was it?
Eyes have begin to smile,
Cheerful is the face,
Lips are moving with ease,
Things aren’t the same,
Heart is indeed in the hall of fame!
How is your heart? Have you ever entered it?
I like the way you have expressed this… beautiful creation… 🙂 the starting and end verses are awesome… liked it very much… pleasurable reading… 🙂
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Thank you so much Ashish.. 🙂 Its a pleasure to read your comments.. 🙂
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I have nominated you for twin awards… check here… https://ashishvision.wordpress.com/2015/07/08/dragons-royalty-premio-dardos-award/ 🙂
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wowww! i have many to do in my list now.. this is so much fun to receive. Added to list. AM honored to receive it. Thank you so much.. 🙂
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Its my pleasure to reward you Prakash… 🙂
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Hey buddy,
Creative post. I loved reading it:)
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Thank you so much Upen! 🙂
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So beautiful.. you write so well…
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Thank you so much.. 🙂
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😀😀😀
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Reblogged this on fablesandcastles and commented:
No, we have never entered in our hearts, but this post definitely has.
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Beautiful writing.. 🙂
Things surely go the way we make them to…
And our perspectives do pave the path for the journey called ‘Life’… 🙂
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True! 🙂
Thank you so much.. 🙂
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If everyone takes that tour just once, the world would be a better place to live in !! 🙂
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Very much agree to that. Thank you for the thoughts.. 🙂
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