Short story “Extra and Ordinary” is written for the Mondays Finish the Story Challenge – June 15, 2015. The task is, given the image and starting line, to complete the story in 100 to 150 words.
At first, it looked like an ordinary marble, but it was far from it. It was not ordinary because it was with him all through his childhood and even when there was no one else to play around. It was not at all ordinary because it had undergone many patches and still was his favorite toy that had stayed with him from past many years. It was more than ordinary because the day since he had become orphan, this was the only memory he had representing his past. It was extra-ordinary because whenever he held it in his hands he felt the upbeat as it was his father’s first gift.
More importantly, he had not seen it all past these years and it was one of the first things he wanted to see. He had finally earned enough money for his operation. He was getting his eyes operated in hours and doctors had assured that he would be able to see.
Jon was getting his greatest birthday gift on his 50th birthday!
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What could be better than the gift of sight to a blind person? Well done Prakash! Just lovely! Thank you for writing again for the MFtS challenge. Be well… ^..^
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Thank you so much… Thank you for the interesting prompt.. 🙂
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I am glad you enjoyed the prompt!
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Lovely writing there!!!
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Thank you ANooP.. 🙂
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That was a nice build-up…. As I saw the picture, I paused for a moment and tried to think of a story, but nothing triggered. You have made it very well… 🙂
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Yeah. This one took a while to pen down.. Thank you so much.. 🙂
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That sounds like the best gift he could ever receive. Great story. 🙂
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Though it was after a long time, indeed true.
Thank you so much.. 🙂
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Sad story but with hope at the end. Nicely done.
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Thank you many… 🙂
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That would be the greatest gift for any person who cannot see. I hope it is a success.
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True. It is.
Thank you so much… 🙂
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Loved your story Prakash! The ending was great!
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Thank you so much. I am happy you liked it.. 🙂
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Wow! Beautiful thought, I should say… 🙂
Flawless writing..! 🙂
You brought out the story so well… 🙂
Loved it…!! 😉
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I am so much smiles. Thank you Umair! 🙂
It took a while to pen this down! And i am happy that it was worth it!
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Oh wow, what a magnificent upbeat ending to the story! I love the description that’s woven around the marble showing how amazingly un-ordinary it is indeed. Very well done!
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Thank you so much. Your comment made my day.. 🙂 I am glad you observed the finer details. Thank you so much again.. 🙂
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Wonderful play on the unordinary ordinary and what a joyous ending. I needed a feel-good story today!! Thank you!!!!
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Thank you so much.
I am so much glad that you consider this as one.I am all smiles.. 🙂
Thank you.. 🙂
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Well done Prakash, well done indeed.
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Thank you..
Thank you so much.. 🙂
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Great take and beautifully done.
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Thank you so much… 🙂
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I am never let down when I read your poetry and stories. Another excellent bit of writing! And very uplifting, sentimental, and emotional. Xx
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Thank you… 🙂
That is really encouraging. Thank you so much.. 🙂
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An unexpected but lovely twist at the end, very well crafted:) Oh and thank you for visiting my blog, I love visiting others through likes to mine I find some unexpected gems 🙂
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Thank you so much… 🙂
Thank you for the lovely comment.. 🙂
I will visit again soon..
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Well done, Prakash. That would indeed be a great gift. Really effective use of the prompt. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thank you so much Ma’am.. 🙂
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The story is more than ordinary. It’s extra ordinary!! 🙂
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Thank you so much Vipul… 🙂
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WOW Prakash that is a beautiful story!!! You are so talented! I have missed visiting your blog>>>I will endeavor to get here more…
Sherri-Ellen & Purrince Siddhartha
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Thank you so much.. this means a lot.. 🙂
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I love all the flavours of “ordinary” you introduced. And what a wonderful gift to be given – soon he’ll be able to see the marble that’s been with him throughout his life. Nice story!
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Thank you so much.. 🙂
This sure does mean a lot.. 🙂
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