This poem is written for Poetry 101 Rehab: Away . The prompt demands to pen down something on the theme “Away”.
Away is not when,
I don’t get to see you.
I don’t get to hear you.
I don’t get to touch you.
I don’t get to smell you.
Away is when,
I see you, Still you stay blind,
I hear you, Still you stay ignored,
I touch you, Still you stay unresponsive,
I smell you, Still you stay unaffected.
Away is not when you are far!
Away is when you are near and yet so far!
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wow…this is one of your best post..the definition of “away” is true & awesome…&
“Away is not when you are far!
Away is when you are near and yet so far!”
are the best lines serve as quote! 🙂
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Thank you so much.. this means a lot to me.. 🙂
😀 I am happy you liked it..
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This is lovely!
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Thank you.. 🙂 many…
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Wow. What a powerful observation. What a lonely place it is that is created when someone near is so far away in the sense that you describe. Thank you.
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Exactly what i had in my mind.. thank you so much… 🙂
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Beautiful Poem!
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Thank you so much… 🙂
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awesome PH 🙂
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Thanks a many… 🙂 and many… 🙂
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Nice lines, no doubt. But what I liked more is the bold that you used for the first line of every stanza. That draws attention faster….
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oh, thank you.. 🙂 Had not expected that. Glad you mentioned it.. 🙂
Thank you so much.. 🙂
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this feels like a song prakash…. !!… and a very sweet one too! 😀
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Thank you so much… 🙂
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I cannot but join those who commented before me in the praise – an excellent piece, brilliantly observed!
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Thank you so much… 🙂
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wonderful poem… loved the ultimate lines…
“Away is not when you are far!
Away is when you are near and yet so far! ”
very nice… 🙂
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Thank you so much.. 🙂
i am glad you liked the last lines.. 🙂
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Beautiful poem:)
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Thank you… 🙂
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How the word ‘Away’ could mean extremely different things. It isn’t about physical proximity, but about the proximity within. Lovely play of words. 🙂
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Wow! You have summed up the poem so well.. 🙂
Thank you so much.. 🙂
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