bard writes on water,
bard is exhausted and drowsy,
bard demands water.
Task is to write a Haiku on bard and water. You can check out the challenge and other’s take on the prompt from HERE.
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bard writes on water,
bard is exhausted and drowsy,
bard demands water.
Task is to write a Haiku on bard and water. You can check out the challenge and other’s take on the prompt from HERE.
These lines beautifully capture the entire scene.
I can imagine bard getting exhausted and I wish he could have water!
The poem flows very well!!!
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ha ha.. Thank you many.. 🙂
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Its funny to imagine!
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Well written man. He deserves water and some cookies 😉
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He He.. Thank you so much ANooP.. 🙂
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NIce one,,, 🙂
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Thank you Umair.. 🙂
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‘Bard in the water
Floating in life raft; adrift…
Bard needs an anchor!’ 😉
Great Haiku Prakash; I could not resist replying with my own Haiku!
Sherri-Ellen
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Wow! That is a great Haiku as well! 🙂
And has so much meaning. Really nice one! 🙂
and Thank you.. 🙂
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😉 Your Haiku inspired my Haiku!
When I was in High School we had a Poetry group. One person would write a Haiku or short poem & then each person would write a companion poem in turn! It was very interesting to see where our collective thoughts went.
I never was much good at Haiku…now I am finding them easier to create & write 🙂
Sherri-Ellen
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That is a really cool idea.. and we all learn with time.. 🙂 I will definitely try that in some way.. 🙂
You have now mastered writing haiku! 🙂
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It was a fun way to be creative & learn more about poetry writing. It would be cool if you wrote a Haiku here & then invited people to write one in reply to yours & see where it goes…..
I am far from a good Haiku writer…my imagery is not perfected yet….practice makes progress (lol not perfection…)
Sherri-Ellen
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That’s a nice idea.. Well i would say that practice makes perfection and the measure in-between is the progress.. 🙂
You do make a good haiku writer!
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[…] of It’s PH: Barded out. Funny. 🙂 But oddly relaxing in some way. I can’t explain it. But there is an imagery in […]
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The first line makes bard seem like some other-worldly unreal being. the second one makes him a mortal being with physical limitations. Then he becomes demanding about his ordinary needs that must be met.
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This is kind of exactly the thoughts i had in mind while writing it!
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That means I could read the Haiku properly 🙂
How true though. Even the bard knows that reality is different from airy fairy dream-like writing.
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Well, Yes. Absolutely! 🙂
True. And water being one of the basic needs, bard needs it too.
Thank you… 🙂
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Thank you Prakash for the compliment. I think I find Haiku easier now because I am more disciplined & more mature & willing to work within the Haiku perimeter.
Sherri-Ellen
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