This story is written for Sunday Photo Fiction: 10 May 2015. The task is to write a short story for the supplied photograph.
She was done with daily chores of cleaning, cooking, washing and other stuff and was waiting for her kids to be back. She was about to sit and switch on the TV and her kids rushed back home with excitement. She prepared snacks and tea, asked about their day at school and checked their diary for home work. She asked them to go and play for a while and return back before sunset. She called her husband asking about his work and reminded him to pick up a gift for his sister’s wedding anniversary. The evening seemed calm and pleasant as she stepped out of her home.
She started talking slow steps in her garden. The Mother Nature looked at her, smiled and slowly generated a rainbow. She had her heart filled out looking at the rainbow and kept staring at it. Mother Nature whispered,
“You make every one’s life beautiful. Here is a beautiful evening for you. A very happy Mother’s day! ”
This post is also dedicated to all loving Mother’s on Mother’s day. (Second Sunday of May 2015)
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Yayy!
So beautifully written…. 🙂
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🙂 eww.. Thank you.. 🙂 many.. 🙂
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I was expecting this today 🙂
So beautifully written sir 😊 really sweet 😊
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Trust me, I was expecting your comment! 🙂
thank you so much Sahithya.. 🙂
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You’ve brought the mother’s day connectivity in such a pleasant way. Refreshing one 🙂
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Thank you so much.. 🙂
am so glad you liked it! 🙂
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nice story. well connected to the day’s special. good read.
A Rat’s Nibble
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Thank you so much.. 🙂
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What a touching piece of prose Prakash…I love this story!
Sherri-Ellen
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Thanks a lot.. This means a lot! 🙂
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Very nice story PH 🙂
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Thank you so much.. 🙂
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Lovely!
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Thank you.. 🙂
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Nice tribute to Mother’s Day. Lovely story. 🙂
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🙂
Thanks a many.. 🙂
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What a wonderful story.
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Thank you so much! 🙂
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You’re welcome!
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Wow such a pleasant post. It goes well perfectly with the photograph. Amazing narration Prakash 🙂 Loved it.
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Thanks a lot Gowtham.. 🙂
This means a lot.. 🙂
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Wonderfully written PH 🙂 You nailed it.
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Thank you Anoop! 🙂
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Awww, this is really lovely *still smiling while writing this*. A beautiful dedication to mothers 🙂
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Thank you so much..! 🙂
I am so smiles as well reading your comment.. 🙂
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Wow! That was a beautiful ode for our mothers. I’m gonna show this to my mom tomorrow. 🙂
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Thanks a many! That is the best thing that can ever happen to this piece of writing!
🙂 Thank you so much.. 🙂
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That is so kind of you. 🙂
You’re most welcome! 🙂
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Aww, this is soooo beautiful.
Liked the write up…
The full description.
Well done. 🙂
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Thank you so much! 🙂
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Touching post. Good work dear.
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🙂
Thanks a lot Sunny… 🙂
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