The hands of a clock,
Always have a stock,
Of,
Tick tock’s couple,
Ding Dong’s couple.
The hands together,
Bonded forever,
Moving with,
Couple of seconds,
Couple of minutes.
One hand following the other,
Said,
Without “U”,
I am just a meaningless
“cople”.
This Poem is Written for Poetry 101 Rehab: Couple.
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lovely play of words… 🙂
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Thank you so much.. 🙂
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Beautiful!
(& ofcourse very creative relating the theme “couple” with clocks!)
Way to go!
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Thank you Hargun! 🙂
It somehow sinked in!
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Wonderful use of imagery here!!!
I like the way in which you have presented these ordinary needles of the clock.
Indeed, there is a great lesson in the union and symmetry of the hands of a clock.
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Your comments made my poem look more meaningful. Thank you.. 🙂
Clocks are always a lesson.. 🙂
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Arey wha!! I love this, “Tick tock’s couple, Ding Dong’s couple.” 🙂 Beautiful!!
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he he… thank you.. 🙂
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Any time 😉
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Oh that’s a very smart idea and a nicely playful poem! I’m enjoying your creativity a lot 🙂
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Thank you so much.. this means a lot to me… 🙂
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And they meet only twice a day 😉
Great poem!
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That’s a nice addition! 🙂
Thank you.. 🙂
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Clever play of words 🙂
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Thank you so much.. 🙂
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Wow, beautiful. They are not just pretty words.
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haaa.. thank you so much.. 🙂
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Very nice! 😀
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Thank you so much! 🙂
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You’re always welcome.
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Great one, Prakash! You always move a step ahead than our imaginations. 🙂
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Heee yay! Thank you.. That really means a lot.. 🙂
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You’re always welcome! 🙂
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Clever and even slightly romantic ❤ Like one chasing the other, greeting one another several times a day for mere seconds, spending only minutes a day together. They'll never tire of another!
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That was the most apt summary. I am so glad you liked it.
Thank you so much! The poem now looks so much more meaningful.. 🙂
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😀
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Clever very clever Prakash 😉
Sherri-Ellen
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Thank you so much.. 🙂
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I enjoyed reading it.
And it’s also creating images in my head #o_O
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Thank you so much.. 🙂
wow.. nice and glad to hear that… 🙂
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Hey Ph – this is wonderful – fun and flowing! 🙂 – and as you can tell I was just getting a cacth up on some of your recent posts – keep writing – you have such a nice style.
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Thank you so much! It is so much of an inspiration to do better! 🙂
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well my pleasure – have a nice weekend PH
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Thanks again.
A happy weekend to you as well! 🙂
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