Written for Ronavan Writes Weekly Haiku Challenge #42 – Love and Last.
love lasts for a while,
when the while is forever,
forever looks a while.
Written for Ronavan Writes Weekly Haiku Challenge #42 – Love and Last.
love lasts for a while,
when the while is forever,
forever looks a while.
Its PH 
Forever seems a second as well 🙂
Great post 🙂
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seconds forever..
Thank you.. 🙂
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Such a beautiful message in just three lines.! 🙂
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Thanks a many.. 🙂
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Such a wonderful though conveyed in 3 simple lines. Brilliant.
One of the best Haiku’s I have read here.
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Thank you ANoop!
It’s really a happiness to hear that.. 🙂
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Very nice! both the haiku and that picture!
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Thanks a many.. 🙂
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Awww, ahhh, i have no words for this. These three lines speak volumes! Love it!
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Thank you Ameena.. 🙂
Its awesome to hear that! 🙂
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Beautiful Click
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Thank you.. 🙂 It’s actually from the challenge!
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very deep..!!
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Thanks a many.. 🙂
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Amazing line very beautiful…….
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Thank you so much.. 🙂
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Very beautiful line……. Amazing
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Thanks a many and more.. 🙂
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You speak volumes with few yards. Wonderful.
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🙂
Thank you so much.. this means a lot.. 🙂
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Lovely Prakash! I totally get it. You know how to weave words. 😀
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Such a lovely comment.. Thank you so much.. 🙂
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Oh wow!! Beautiful 🙂
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Thanks a lot Nimmi.. 🙂
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Welcome Welcome 🙂
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Beautiful Haiku Prakash…Today is the 19th anniversary of my husband Paul’s death…the LOVE has NEVER left me….it grows even as time passes…thank you for this poem…It made me smile today!
Sincerely, Sherri-Ellen
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Sorry to hear that. And i am really happy that this come out at a very right time.
I am so happy that it made you smile. It is indeed really my pleasure. Thank you so much.. 🙂
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🙂 This Haiku came out at ‘just’ the right time Prakash.
Isn’t it wonderful how these coincidences happen…it is so cosmic & very cool….
Even tho’ I cried I also smiled….because your poem touched my heart.
Thank you again my friend.
Sherri-Ellen
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very nice proverb !!
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Thanks a lot.. 🙂
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A very deep and original feeling put out in the three….. Nice..! 😉
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Thank you Umair.. It’s such a pleasure to read your comments.. 🙂
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Read that five times real fast.
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ha ha… Now i tried it as well.. 🙂
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[…] of It’s PH: Tongue Twisted. Yeah, interesting title for a theme of Love and Last, right? Yeah, again, I came up with it. […]
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And sometimes forever lasts only a few moments…
Such nice lines..
Made my Monday morning.
Have a nice day.
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Thank you so much! Your comment made my day as well! 🙂
Good day to you too.. 🙂
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love lasts for while(1) 😜
Such an amazing post.. 😃
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Thank you Sachin… 🙂
Happy that you liked it!
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I have always loved the simplicity of Haiku. I have a Japanese mentor whose guidance has made a big difference in my life and he has written many haiku. Some of his that I have on my wall is in kangi.
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Really nice to hear that! I will look at them soon.. 🙂
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Prakash, beautiful poem! Loved it❤
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Thank you so much! 🙂
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