When I see you, I get a,
Sweet crush,
Sugar rush,
Honey ecstasy,
Saccharine fantasy,
Syrupy gulp,
Chocolaty pulp,
Overloaded drink!
Wink! Wink!
This poem is written for Poetry 101 Rehab : Sugar.
For more sugar, you can read the poems written by others here by clicking on the blue fellow:
Its PH 
Aww !! Such a cute poem sir 👏
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Thank you Sahithya!
Such a sweet comment.. 🙂
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Oh wow! That is so short and sweet. It brought a big smile on my face. Thank you for that! 🙂
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eee.. thank you so much!
That made me smile as well.. 🙂
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Now that is a very very sweet poem Prakash 🙂
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Thank you so much for the sweet comment! 🙂
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Wow! So cutely rhythmic 🙂
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😀 Thank you so much! 😀 🙂
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wow!This is soo cool 😛
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🙂
Thank you so much… 🙂
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🙂
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Very sweet. Just like Sugar 🙂 nice poem.
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Thanks a many..
I am glad you liked.. 🙂
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Sugar rush, sugar crush… Your poem just got in my head and I can’t get it out even if I wanted to!
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That is such a lovely comment! You made my day.. 🙂
I am happy! 🙂 Thanks a many.. 🙂
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You put a smile on my face. A lovely poem (Y)
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I am so glad.. Thank you so much… 🙂
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This is so cute 🙂
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Thanks a many… 🙂
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awwww cho chwweet
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🙂 Thank you so much… 🙂
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Ah such a sweet one
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Thanks a many… 🙂
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You have the heart of a poet.
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such a sweet comment.. 🙂
Thank you so much.. 🙂
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really very sweet!!
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Thank you so much.. 🙂
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A poem that makes smile. Is there anything better than that? Thanks!
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You made my day.. thank you many.. 🙂
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This one made me laugh and m still smiling while writing this comment!! 🙂 🙂
Pool of sweetness!!
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It’s such a pleasure to hear that.. am all smiles. Thank you.. 🙂
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Haha, this right here is an overload of sweetness :D. Yummy!
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he he.. a sweetness overloaded comment as well.. Thank you.. 🙂
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Very sweet and mouthwatering poem :p
Btw, who is that ‘You’.. ?? 😉
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ha ha… Thank you many.. 🙂
That’s kind of obvious!
I dedicated it to my wife and she was so damn happy when i read it to her! 🙂
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Good one..!
I should say, your wife’s really lucky..!! 😉
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See!
🙂 😀
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My husband has written poetry to me as well. I recently found one that he wrote 15 years ago. It had been packed up for a long time. If you wanted to look it up it is on my 2nd blog, Watch and whirl. Scroll down a bit. It is called “None”
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Ah! Nice. Sure. I will look it up soon.. 🙂
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( and a trip to the dentist! )
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ha ha… LOL..
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well it was kinda sweet ;-))
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Thank you.. 🙂
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Heads-up: link on ‘Poetry 101 Rehab : Sugar’ is dead; looks like the ‘maraeastern.com’ custom domain name has gone walkies. On a hunch I tried inserting ‘.wordpress’ and got lucky, so this can easily be fixed by amending the link to point instead to:
This comment was brought to you courtesy of 💥 ?Random Raiders! 💥
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It’s a pretty old post and thanks a lot for the heads-up! 😀 I am not sure if I can edit back, but will try. 😀 Thanks a lot. 😀
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Should be easy enough; just hit the ‘edit’ link (should be at the foot of the post). A five minute job. Possibly less. 🙂
Give me a shout if you need help.
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I will try that. 😀
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Bah… my earlier comment has vanished entirely (might have been routed to your ‘spam’ folder); I’ll try again without the 💥 ?Random Raiders! 💥 link. Apologies if this ends up as a duplicate (you can always delete one of them).
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Heads-up: link on ‘Poetry 101 Rehab : Sugar’ is dead; looks like the ‘maraeastern.com’ custom domain name has gone walkies. On a hunch I tried inserting ‘.wordpress’ and got lucky, so this can easily be fixed by amending the link to point instead to:
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Happens at times. 😀
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