The gloomy days of past,
The frozen feelings of dark,
Girl, you are the thaw.
The promising days of present,
The caring like of divine,
Girl, you are the thaw.
The shining days of future,
The rising emotions of glory,
Girl, you are the thaw.
Written for the Poetry Rehab 101: Thaw
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Very well written mate 🙂
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Thank you ANoop.. 🙂
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Awww, this is bee-you-tiful 😍. Actually, its too beautiful! If I was a boy, i would definitely use this to swoon my girl 😀
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ha ha ha.. thank you so much… i had really no expectations that it would turn so well.. 😀
That’s so much of a compliment!
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This is beautiful! So seductive 😉 A lucky girl for whom this poem was written, even if she might be “only” the product of poetic imagination…
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eeewww! Thank you so much…. 😀 am sooo smiles..
she was the product of poetic imagination only… 😀
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This one is beautiful, PH 🙂 Nice set of words 😉
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😀 Thank you so much… 🙂
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Neat 😀
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Surprisingly Happy! Thanks Vrashabh! 🙂
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Beautiful! Nicely done.
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Thank you Piyush.. 🙂 many…
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Past ,present and future have been beautifully expressed in your poem .Selection of words is beautiful:)Great work PH:)
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Thank you so much suchetana.. 🙂
am glad you picked and found it good.. 🙂
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This poem is a complete justice to the title..it’s simply beautiful! 😉
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Thank you so much.. many… 🙂
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Good one mate..!!! 🙂
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Thank you Samjoth! 🙂
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🙂
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Liked the way you’ve used the word ‘thaw’ 🙂 very well written…
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Thank you so much…. 🙂
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Touching & beautifully written poem Prakash~Sherri-Ellen
Mee-you Mistur Prakash thiss poe-em iss luvley…mee wishess mee could write sumfing as luvley fur mee Purincess Phoebe 😉 Butt mee iss not a poe-et like you~ Reespectfullee Purrince Siddhartha
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Thank you so much.. 🙂 am glad.. 🙂
meeooowww…. meeeoowww… thank youuu… furry has got smiles on my face.. and you are lovely too… Princess Phoebe would be impressed just by your mee-you.. 😛
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Hello Prakash it is lovely to make your acquaintance here. You have a real talent for poetry (I write also, but never share).
I hope you do not have trouble understanding Siddhartha Henry as he has his own way of speaking 😉 ~Sherri-Ellen
Mee-you Mistur Prakash fank you fur thee complimint..mee iss so happy mee put a 🙂 on yur face! Mee finkss Purrincess Phoebe ISS impressed butt mee too much of a gentle Kat to ask 😉 ~Purrince Siddhartha Henry =^,.^=
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Thank you many… I will visit your blog soon.. 🙂 I can totally understand Siddhartha Henry. 🙂 He is adorable.
Mee-you kitty kat.. you aree so luv-leee… Purrincess Phoebe would like you gentle.. you are thee kat! 🙂 fank you prince! 🙂
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You are most welcome. I am so glad you can understand Siddhartha’s ‘cat speak’. He is still ‘learning’ how to speak English, lol….
He IS totally adorable Prakash. I had NO intention of adopting so soon after losing Nylablue nor adopting a young cat…the Universe had a surprise for me 😉
Sherri-Ellen..
MEE-YOU Mistur Prakash fank you fur thee kind werdss. Mee will try to speek good Hu’man speek. It iss all new to mee 😉
Mee iss all *blushie* frum thee complimintss. Mee sweet Purrincess Phoebe iss an ‘older’ ladykat an mee iss gentull an berry reespectfull to her. Mee ferst LUV…LadyMum sayss mee will nevurr furget thiss…
Yur furend Purrince Siddhartha Henry =^,.^=
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Ha ha ha.. lol.. He is indeed cute. We had almost exact similar black tom cat… like around 03 years ago.. some tom cats never return home.. so did he.. now we have a few at home.. 🙂
It was indeed a surprise.. i guess it was destined.. and get all the love and care from you.. nice.. 🙂
Mee-you siddhartha henry.. gald to talk to youuu.. 🙂 you aree-ee berry ado-rabble.. learn englissshh soonnn… its fun… 🙂 care to you… 🙂
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Namaste Prakash, it is a funny thing about me adopting this kittyboy.
Since I was in my 20’s I have wanted a Burmese male that I would name Siddhartha. But all my cats have been female over the years.
I visualized a male Burmese last Summer while sitting out on my patio. I never really gave it another thought after that.
Nylablue passed Nov. 22nd & I was helping at a Cat adoption event Nov.29th. All the wee kittens were being snuggled & cuddled but this Burmese boy with the ‘bad’ eye was being ignored. I would talk to the boy & he kept climbing up the enclosure to be with me. He did not answer to his name. I kept giggling & calling him “Dharth” (as in Dharth Vader from Star Wars) & he kept purring & purring. It hit me a few days later that this cat was Burmese (the breed I always wanted) & Dharth is short for Siddhartha!!! I adopted Siddhartha Henry
Dec. 9th. Definitely meant to be Prakash; this was not by chance.
I also believe Nylablue guided me to Siddhartha Henry, I was NOT going to work that event but I had promised Nylablue I would go in her memory….how could I break a promise to my beloved kittygirl??
The universe never ceases to amaze & humble me. 😉
Sherri-Ellen
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I will be back soon on this…! 🙂
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WoW! I think you should make this a post as well. Its heart touching and one worth to be shared with all others as well.. 🙂
Really it was nice to read.. 🙂
am in mixed emotions of smiles and surprises!
True, Universe always plans a surprise.. 🙂
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Love is difficult when felt and more difficult to express – but you really did a great job.
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Thank you many…
🙂
Thank you for the lovely comment.. 🙂
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Thank you for the enouragement Prakash.
Here is the link to the blog introduching Purrince Siddhartha~his 1st blog.
I will have to try writing about my wanting a Burmese…it would be a good post! 🙂
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I will definitely check out soon.. 🙂
Thank you..
Yeah.. That would be a good post.. 🙂
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