This story is written for Mondays Finish the Story: March 16, 2015. The task is, a photograph and a beginning line is given and the story needs to be completed in about 150 words.
A body suddenly crashed through a plate glass window at the Brigadier’s house. Disturbed were the people around who were busy in their daily chores. For a minute they were all looking intently at each other, not realizing how to seize the situation. They called all the maids and watch keepers and the entire mansion heard a creepy silence. It was cold.
The little yellow bird which had crashed in almost looked dead. It seemed that it was chased by an eagle. One of the maids ran down the mansion and got some mud from the garden. She gently applied it on the bird’s body which had a thin scar. Drops of water through the bird’s beak were delivered slowly.
Five minutes, it flapped its wings slowly, took a huge round in the hall and flew away through the window. Everyone smiled and the maid was rewarded.
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Nice writeup
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Thank you so much… 🙂
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You went the way of the bird too! I really like your story and enjoyed reading it! I’m glad the bird lived. Unfortunately, mine didn’t. 😀
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Thank you so much.. 🙂 Wanted to give a little twist. 🙂 glad it worked.
I will be there to read soon.. 🙂
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I’m glad the bird survived. Sweet story. 🙂
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😀 Thank you so much… 🙂
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Most thought of a human body, and I like your take of making it a bird! Well done! Thank you for participating Prakash in the MFtS challenge! I hope that you return next week! Be well…
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Thank you so much… 🙂
The prompt was intriguing to write something creative.. 🙂 Bird idea came in naturally and i thought it would make it interesting!
Thank you.. 🙂 Yeah.. i will be there!
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YW! I look forward to seeing what you come up with on the next challenge!
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Sure i am as well… 🙂
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All that from that photo…..love it.
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Thank you so much! 🙂
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Nice story!
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Thank you Piyush.. 🙂
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Really sweet story, Prakash. Nice to hear about someone loving nature. I’m glad the bird survived. Well done. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thank you so much ma’am.. its a nice compliment to get. 🙂 am glad.. 🙂
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I love the happy ending in this. And the bird gets to fly again. Very well written. 🙂
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The story took a while and edits before reaching there… Thank you… 🙂
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