It has started now, now it has started,
What we are and what we can be,
Chart your plans, let plans be charted,
We can be what we are imagined to be.
Apply the learn, learn to apply,
It’s already time-out, past is to exhale,
Supply the apply, apply the Supply,
It’s already time-in, future is to inhale.
Make no predictions, predict no one,
Run is too long, long is the run,
Create all you need, right from zero,
Aye, aye, that’s the way to be the superhero.
The surprises waiting ahead in future,
Is the magnificence, inherent in nature.
Poem form: Sonnet and Device: Chiasmus. More Details of the post can be found HERE.
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This line, ‘Aye, aye, that’s the way to be the superhero.’, brought a smile to my face. Your piece has such a lively tone that I can actually hear a loud voice reciting it in my head. Your chiasmi flowed well with the rhyme scheme too. Well written!
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That comment made my poem look so much beautiful! Thank you so much.. 🙂
means a lot.. am glad.. 🙂
Chiasmi took a while to show up. now am happy for the time i spent..
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Really made use of the chiasmus. I could feel it leading the stanza to set the tone.
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🙂 Thank you so much! Yeah. Took a while to put them up.. 🙂
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Paid off there. Good job.
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Thank you again! 🙂
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Ah that chiasmus! That must have felt really good to discover. Well done.
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Indeed it did.. 🙂 Thank you so much.. 🙂
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Haven’t read the prompt yet (bad network) so I have no idea what a chiasmus is :D, either way, I love the flow reading this. (Apply supply, supply apply ) i love it!
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Oh, you should read sometime. You will definitely come up with something great!
Thank you.. 🙂 so many.. 🙂
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I would love to try it. It seems sonnet is a classic…. I hope so 🙂
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yeps! 🙂
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I liked the build up … the anticipation in this poem. From starting out, to wondering what the future will be, to hopefully nice surprises. I’ve enjoyed your poetry, and wish you all the best in your writing projects!
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Thank you so much ma’am.. means a lot to me..
i will sure put my best all time and my wishes to you as well too.. 🙂
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