Early i was up, lost in thoughts,
Gazing through the window.
Amidst the mist my fingers moved and painted,
Symbol of immoral on window glass.
I sit on my bed watching the fog disappear,
Washing away the symbol at gentle pace.
I guess the darkness is over; forever,
I mourn with joy!
Darkness is a fog, wait it will disappear,
Sheds light, bright and clear.
Poem Form: Elegy and Device: Metaphor. More details can be found HERE.
Well as long as the fog disappears!
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🙂 indeed!
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Darkness is indeed a fog
Nicely written.
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Thank you. Glad you liked my interpretation.. 🙂
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You are welcome.
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My my my….wow, its so lovely, am searching words how to compliment you on this beautiful creation 🙂 in a word, all i can say is “Wow”
looking forward to hear more from you PH 😀
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Well, what more can make a day more beautiful… am so glad and happy.. thank you so much! am speechless.. 🙂
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You really deserved and certainly am speechless what to say you more on your creative work…splendid 😀
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Thank you so much again.. 🙂 🙂
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Hi Prakash
I am in awe of your poetry. It gives me something to aspire to. I (and probably the rest of your readers) would love to know more about how you weave your magical verses. I was recently nominated for a special kind of ‘award’ called Virtual Blog Tour that lets one share more than just list blogs we like and I would like pass on a nomination to you (Link to my post: https://ruthspoetry.wordpress.com/2015/02/20/blog-tour-award-and-sisterhood-of-the-world-bloggers-award/ Here are the rules if you’d like to accept:
1. Pass the tour on to up to four other bloggers. Give them the rules and a specific Monday to post.
2. Answer four questions about your creative process which lets other bloggers and visitors know what inspires you to do what you do:
•What am I working on at the moment?
•How does my work differ to others in my genre?
•Why do I write/create what I do?
•How does my writing/creative process work?
3. Compose a one-time post which is posted on a specific Monday (date given from your nominator).
The date I would like you to post on – 09 March
Also please don’t feel obliged to do anything. The essence of the matter is that I am a fan and would love to know more about your creative process.
Best regards always,
Ruth.
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That’s a honor! Thank you so much. March 09 looks perfectly okay.
Will visit the link soon for more details.. 🙂 am glad and happy you considered my blog. 🙂
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🙂
I like reading it but why “mourn” with joy?
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Thank you. am glad you asked it. 🙂
Elegy is mostly a poem of mourn. I wanted it to be part of poem, but still have happiness in it. So, i decided to end the bad and mourn for it and have joy. 🙂
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Thank you for explaining:)
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Pleasure is all mine.. 🙂
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Hope the brightness stays forever, though fog (read darkness) is also a part of life.
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That’s always a wish! With a vanishing fog around! Thank you so much!
That was a perfect summary! 🙂
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