I haven’t explored many other poems yet, but I have to say that you really conquered this challenge! You nailed the shape and the poem, intertwining animal and human traits and behavior. WOW!
I love how the hands are composed of the words “bring all change” and the feet describe dreaming – both movement toward doing amazing things and placed in the hands and feet of the individual. Brilliant!
excellent! This was the most difficult assignment so far on Poetry 201 so I am just getting around to exploring other responses. Your whole thing flows – the shape, the words, the ideas in them. Thanks. it must have taken effort.
Thank you so much. It means a lot to me.. 🙂
Yes, it did take a lot of time and transformed various forms before it reached this. Had to give up some words to fit inside the form. 🙂
But, sure it was fun.
this is flowing with glamour, expressive, moving, and lively. It’s alive. Teach us how’d you did it…You won the challenge…i’m # 2 hahahaha. i claimed it…..L O L !
G’day PH,
How very clever of you, you nailed it and the poem itself is terrific as well, I didn’t do the concrete section, I know when to quit while ahead 🙂 looking forward to seeing more of your work in the future.
Can’t believe I missed this one on that day… Thanks to Mutafariq Khayalat I got here at last and loved it.
(wish I knew how to @ her, but so new on WP, so much to learn…)
Have a good day 🙂
Most remarkable and deserving of the nice comments left up to and before today. A pleasure! Some of the ideas which are suggested by your poem are interesting. Unusual way to write and a success!
Its PH 
This is excellent! I failed miserably today with the assignment, I just could not make a shape. How do you do this??!
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Thank you.. many and so much! Trust me, the shape started from elephant, went to panda and then to human. Took a lot of time to edit but had fun.
I would suggest, get the words and then start shaping it out. Take a break and be back again. Something will turn out! 🙂
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I haven’t explored many other poems yet, but I have to say that you really conquered this challenge! You nailed the shape and the poem, intertwining animal and human traits and behavior. WOW!
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am so much smiles.. non-stop…
Thank you so many much! I did enjoy doing this one! 🙂
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This is truly brilliant!
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Thanks a lot.. 🙂 am glad.. 🙂
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Nicely executed!
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Thank you many! 🙂 many.. 🙂
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I love how the hands are composed of the words “bring all change” and the feet describe dreaming – both movement toward doing amazing things and placed in the hands and feet of the individual. Brilliant!
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wow! That was keen observation.. Your comment made my poem look still better! am glad.. Thank you so much! 🙂 Thank you… 🙂
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excellent! This was the most difficult assignment so far on Poetry 201 so I am just getting around to exploring other responses. Your whole thing flows – the shape, the words, the ideas in them. Thanks. it must have taken effort.
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Thank you so much. It means a lot to me.. 🙂
Yes, it did take a lot of time and transformed various forms before it reached this. Had to give up some words to fit inside the form. 🙂
But, sure it was fun.
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very creative-brilliant
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Thank you so much! 🙂
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OH MY GOD.
This is so good. By far, the best visual poetry I’ve read. Seriously! *-*
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eww!
am speechless.. 🙂
You made my day! Thank you so much! 🙂
am so all smiles…
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Seriously PH, this is brilliant. It shows hard work and gives a great, poetic effect. I am just so awed. ;-;
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My efforts now look so much beautiful with all these comments. Am really happy. 🙂
Thank you again.. 🙂
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You are welcome. 🙂
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🙂
🙂
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Wow, very impressive!
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Thank you so many much! 🙂
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Walking words nicely done 🙂
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Thank you.. 🙂
…..so much! 🙂
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Great. Would be a perfect logo for a book fair or a conference of psychology. Love it.
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wow! Thank you so much sir!
Its an honor to receive that comment. Am glad you loved it,
Thank you again.. 🙂
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Well this will put a pep in your step! Thanks
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🙂 Thank you so much! am all up! 🙂
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Expressed so nicely, Prakash!
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Thank you so much sir! 🙂
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this is flowing with glamour, expressive, moving, and lively. It’s alive. Teach us how’d you did it…You won the challenge…i’m # 2 hahahaha. i claimed it…..L O L !
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I first drew it on the book,
Formed the words to give the look!
Thank you, Thank you, i am glad,
claiming win is not at all bad!
Thank you so much! 🙂
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Its really a wonderful presentation. Kudos.
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Thank you so much sir.. 🙂 🙂
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Wow, this is brilliant Sir! 🙂
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Thank you Daneshwari… 🙂
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Wow! You’re the real artist, Prakash!! ❤
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See! That’s what happens when you have too many inspiration around… 🙂
Thank you! 🙂
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Oh, you’re just a ⭐
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hey buddy,
absolutely brilliant<3 .
Now you gotta teach me shape poetry:) will you?
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Thank you Upen! am doing writing201: Poetry.
It been wonderful. I have summed up so far here:
and there is week more to go. You should register in next run! You will love it.. 🙂 And am always ready to help in anyways.. 🙂
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yeah,i will register next time buddy:) I’l take your help for shape poetry:)
cheers
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🙂 see!
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Hi Prakash. You did an amazing job on the shape poetry. I am in awe.
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Thank you so much! 🙂
🙂 many..
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G’day PH,
How very clever of you, you nailed it and the poem itself is terrific as well, I didn’t do the concrete section, I know when to quit while ahead 🙂 looking forward to seeing more of your work in the future.
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wow! Reading this was happiness.. Thank you so much ma’am.. 🙂
i will definitely put forward my best.. 🙂
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it worth to be best of the month. really amazing work.
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Thank you so much.. 🙂 am all smiles.. 🙂
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Can’t believe I missed this one on that day… Thanks to Mutafariq Khayalat I got here at last and loved it.
(wish I knew how to @ her, but so new on WP, so much to learn…)
Have a good day 🙂
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Thank you so much.. 🙂
am glad you liked it.
(You can always link the text. I guess @ will not work!)
Thank you again.. Good day to you too.. 🙂
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Excellent poem and wonderfully creative presentation! Amazing art.
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Thank you so much Josh! 🙂
Thank you… 🙂
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Most remarkable and deserving of the nice comments left up to and before today. A pleasure! Some of the ideas which are suggested by your poem are interesting. Unusual way to write and a success!
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Thank you so much.. 🙂 after a tiring day, this comment made me smile.. 🙂 am all energetic now.. You made my day.. Thank you.. 🙂
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This is obsolutely amazing ❤
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Thank you so much… 🙂
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Reblogged this on J. and M. at Writers Corner and commented:
A brilliant Calligram by Prakash Hegade
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Absolutely BRILLIANT PH ~ Excellent work!
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Thank you so many much… 🙂
am all smiles.. 🙂 🙂
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This is just wonderful! You left me gobsmacked with your creativity!
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Thank you… many… this means a lot to me.. 🙂
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Totally COOL! I love how the words fit in. It looks like a real challenge and certainly time worthy.
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Thank you so much.. 🙂
your comment made it look more beautiful! 🙂
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